We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Sam you are beginning to use adjectives in your writing. You have correctly placed full stops and capital letters.
To add more information to the middle part of your writing before you finish off.
To use other words than "Then" at the start of your sentences.