What’s my goal? Understand and organise, or order text into order. I learnt how to break a story into 4 parts and describe it in order and detail. I found it hard because I not very good at comprehending.
WALT: Write about a moment in time, to create a picture in tye readers mind.
It was a cold Saturday morning, we were playing rugby against Lincoln. I was playing first five. We had the put in to the scrum which was right on our try line. The halfback puts the ball in the scrum and the forwards push over the ball. The halfback does a good pass to me and I decide to take a run.
I brush past the oppositions first five, step past the winger and out run the full back and score the try under the posts. I could hear the parents and coaches cheering me on. It was a 100 metre individual try and probably my best try ever. I ended up getting a hat trick. I got player of the day. We ended up beating them 45-20.